it is important to read famous stories from history 3模作文 2015-06-21
Compared with magazines,reading famous stories from history is my perference.Not only can we learn about ancient people's life through reading famous stories from history,but also we can become confident.Reading famous stories from history even can improve our marks!
In a history class,my teacher said that he decidead to eaxm test.The test is so hard that a iot of student can't answer the questions at all.However,in a famous stories from history,i saw some questions similar to them.So I got the only "A" in my class.
Reading famous stories from history is important.Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-24)
李霄鹏老师回复zzy：
得分：18分
“Compared with magazines,reading famous stories from history is my perference.”这句话和万能句型结合的很好，看来认真听课了。
有个小问题需要注意：第二段“In a history class,my teacher…”开始和第一段末尾衔接不是很连贯，可以加一句过度的话：Let me tell you a true experience of my own. Once in a …
“my teacher said that he decided to exam test.”这个句子有问题，可以改成：my teacher said that he decided to test us / do a test.
另外，a lot of 后面的 student要用复数students, 这个粗心了吧！再仔细一些呀！
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what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-21
There are many difficulties in our lives.To overcome them,what we need is courage.
Since my childhood,I have met not only happiness,butalso difficulties.At that time,I held an opinion that whatever I did,I should not give up.So I had more courage and overcame the difficulties.
Being a teenager studying in modern society,we may meet many difficulties.Compared with giving up,insisting on is my preference.All we need to do is to overcome them with courage behind us.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-24)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：13分
这篇作文有讨巧的嫌疑哦，嘿嘿！几乎都用的是万能句型，缺少和作文内容的结合，并且有4、5句话表达的意思差不多！这样会显得作文很“死板”，多结合实际吧！
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回复内容：(2015-06-24)
李霄鹏老师回复：
得分：13分
这篇作文有讨巧的嫌疑哦，嘿嘿！几乎都用的是万能句型，缺少和作文内容的结合，并且有4、5句话表达的意思差不多！这样会显得作文很“死板”，多结合实际吧！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief 2015-06-21
Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass,that's what John Ruskin said.A word to discribe the key to success which influnced me a lot is Belief.So,to my point of view,belief is the light which lighten my way in difficulties.
At past,I was used to be a goldbrick.But on day,when I got to know some new knowledge about Maths,I found my gift of it.Since then,a belief hoisted in my heart:To be a new-star in Mathmatics.Until now,the flame of me belief has never been put off.
Being a teenager studying in a modern society,I holdW an opinion:With the key of belief ,not only can I refill my life,but also I can achieve my dream.
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李霄鹏老师回复Harvey Yu：
得分：16分
有几个问题需要注意，仔细看一看：
1-对从句的理解和用法不够准确，比如下面两个句子：
1）A word to discribe the key to success which influnced me a lot is Belief.
这句话中定语从句的位置没把握准确，可以改成：A word which describes the key to success.后面 “which influnced me a lot is Belief.”多余了，并且加上去的话，整个句子的结构不对
2) belief is the light which lighten my way in difficulties.
这句话中which后面的动词用“light”就行，light作为名词有“光”的意思，作为动词有“照亮”的意思。并且注意light应用第三人称单数形式：lights，因为which指代的是belief。定语从句同样也是句子，也要有主谓宾等主要成分，自然也要注意谓语动词的时态和语态。
2-“the flame of me belief has never been put off.” 这句话中，me改成“my”，put off改成“put out”，估计你是想表达“熄灭”的含义吧！注意用词的准确性哦！
3-文章开头虽然用了一个名人名言，但是貌似和你的作文关系不大，可以调整一下语言使句子更通顺！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is belief 2015-06-21
If you ask me: what do we need in overcoming difficulties? The answer must be belief.you know why? Not only can we have a direction but also we can have elevato ideology and morality.When i am down my mum always tells me: believe in yourself you can win. This becomes my belief and makes me overcome many difficulties. so being a teenager studying in morden society,i hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is belief. Dont you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-24)
李霄鹏老师回复郑森文：
得分：17分
“but also we can have elevate ideology and morality.”这句话中多了一个动词“have”
整体来说，作文写的比较通顺。不足的是，没有充分结合自身实际，比如你写到“当我失落的时候，我的妈妈告诉我…”这里可以进行适当的补充，比如失落的具体的事情是什么，你又是如何通过信念鼓舞自己最终克服困难的，这样你的作文就更贴合主题了！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-20
Life is a road which is filled with difficulties. As far as I am concerned, what we need in overcoming difficulties is nothing but confidence. Unless there exists self-confidence in your heart, you can hardly make any of those you expect come true.
Being a new-perioded teenager living with much of pressure and stress, I was short of confidence and too worried about what other people said to have my own character showed at the age of eight. My mother encouraged me to be confident and give the real side of myself to the others without fear and worry before a speaking competition. I won the first price at last because of my confidence.
Therefore, it can be concluded that confidence is the way to solve difficulties and the key to the success. At the time we are in trouble with a pale face and an embarrassed heart, we are in need of confidence.
Don't you think so?
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不久之前发的作业好像打错了一个单词，改正后再发一遍=。=
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复没名可起：
得分：17分
1-“you can hardly make any of those you expect come true.”介词后面接宾格，those要改成them或者在those后面加dreams
2-“I was short of confidence and too worried about what other people said to have my own character showed at the age of eight. ”这句话结构有问题，也不是很好理解？是不是漏写或者多打了什么单词呢？
你的作文虽然句子都比较长，但是也要注意句子与句子间的逻辑关系，除了写出出彩的句子，更要重视文章的连贯程度！
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence 2015-06-20
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
When I was a student of grade 8.I took part in the sports meeting.Though I had confidence in myseif at ordinary times,but I was still afraid that I would lost the race.Can me do best? I asked myself.Unluckily，I did woese in the race.
How time flies,three months ago,I took part in the sports meeting again,but this time .I was sure that I would did well.Unsurprisingly,I got the first place.Both of
my teachers and sudents were proud of me.
Not only can we do well in the sports meeting,but also we can overcome difficuties
in daily life. What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复张三：
得分：17分
文章能够结合自身经历，也用到了万能句型，值得鼓励
提醒一点的是：情态动词的用法似乎没有完全掌握
would属于情态动词，后接动词原形，所以“would lost，would did”等的写法都是不正确的，应该是“would lose the race, would do it well”
“Can me do best”中的me是宾格，本句需要主格，改me为I
“I did worse in the race”最好前后有比较，worse是比较级
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what we need in overcoming difficulties is belief 累死我了= =。。 2015-06-20
our life can not always happy,and we are always face difficulties .I think that we must have belief because belief can encourage us and give us confident to overcoming difficulties！
Once I was very good at running and I wanted to became a sportman .But because an accident,my legs were hurt,I was very sad,but I believe that I could back to the school and run again because I have a belief that nothing is impossible.
Being a teenager studying in the morden city,I hold an opinion that we need a belief to help us over coming difficulties！
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复王冰：
得分：16分
有几个词的用法需要注意：
1-介词in后面接动名词：in overcoming difficulties
2-to 后面接动词原形（to作介词时除外）：to overcome difficulties
3-help sb. do sth.: help us overcome difficulties
4-because是连词，后面需要接句子，如果你想加的是短语，可以用because of…
另外，整体文章because用的太过频繁，可以换成as引导原因 状语从句，可以用表语从句：the reason is that…
最后，从说明观点到举例，中间可以加一个句子进行过度，如：在“Once I was very good at …”这个句子前加：Let me tell you the story of my experience.
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is confidence——哈哈哈哈哈的海哥 2015-06-20
Confidence equals wealth. Being a teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that self-confidence is vital whenever we meet difficulties.
There is an unforgettable experience which is like a twinkling star in my memory. Once a day, my teacher gave me a task on giving a speech to the whole school. I practiced it day and night. Two days later, truly standing in front of the teachers and the students, I felt quite nervous. But when I saw the encouragement in my teacher’s eyes, confidence was filled with my body in a sudden. Everything went as I expected. Hearing the applause in the end, I knew I made it.
Trust yourself and never say die. Hold your head up and face the world bravely. confidence is the key to success,if you hold it, victory will remain to you.
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Cynthia：
得分：19分
文章整体很连贯，写的不错，看得出来平时下了不少功夫，用到了不少短语和副词来进行修饰，演讲的经历也与众不同，有新意
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What we need in Overcome difficulties is courage. 2015-06-20
Life will encounter many difficulties.Being a teenager,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcome difficulties is courage.
I am always the winner in every exam.But once I got a mark so low that I could hardly believe.I was very upset and lost confidence.The bright sun looked even very dark .
However,my mum didn't blame me.She encourage me"You must admit that you cannot be perfect.The only thing you can do ismakeyoubetter than before.Never give up and you will be successful.Come on!You can do it!''
Mum's words not only made go out of the shadow of failure but also raised my spirits.Since then, compared with playing,Learning has been my preference.I got high marks in the next exam.I firmly believe that what we need in overcome t difficulties is courage.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复卓越a班546674495 ：
得分：18分
整体通顺，议论和记叙的比例也结合的不错，注意下面几个小问题：
1-介词in后面应该接动名词，所以“ what we need in overcome difficulties is courage.”这句话中的overcome应该改成“overcoming”
2-“遭遇困恼”的主语不应该是“Life”，而应该是“I”或者“We”
3-“She encourage me"You must admit that you cannot…”注意时态一致，encourage应改为：encouraged
4-“Mum's words not only made go out of… “句子不完整，在go前面加上“me”
5-“The only thing you can do ismake you better than before.”这个句子中的改成“yourself”更符合语境
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking 2015-06-20
What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking
There’re many difficulties in lives. Compared with gifts, hardworking is an important skill. Not only can it help us achieve our dreams, but also it can overcome difficulties.
Once I was poor at maths. My maths teacher told me that the best method to learn it well is hardworking. Then I found a few problems which seemed hard for me before. I tried to thought them for a long time and solved them in special methods. And I also listened carefully to the teacher .Gradually, I felt relaxed to learn maths.
Being an teenager studying in modern society, I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficulties is hardworking .
Don’t you think so?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Beatrice ：
得分：18分
总体来说比较流畅，中间描写亲身经历的段落可以再衔接的自然点
如：“Then I found a few problems which seemed hard for me before. I tried to thought them for a long time and solved them in special methods. ”这句话可以改成：After that, when I met new maths problems, I tried to think it over and solve them in special methods instead of giving up directly. 注意，tried to后面的and连接的是两个并列的成分，to后面的动词都应该用原形的形式
另外，在某些方面，应该是“in doing sth”－》I felt relaxed in learning maths.
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage 2015-06-20
What we need in overcoming difficulties is courage
In the life,we have lots of difficulties in many ways.
Compared with sating down in there to sad,having courage to face is my preference.
In study,as we meet some hard questions,some people may be choose to give up,but I can find a way to solve,never give up,Not only can we learn of some new knowledges,but also we can solve the problem.
Being a teenager studying in modern society,I hold an opinion that we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.
Don't you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Vicky ：
得分：16分
自身经历结合的太少，中考时，如果字数偏差太多，会扣分，所以可以适当加一些“真材实料”
另外，写作时要细心的组织语言，来看几个需要修改的地方：
1-“Compared with sating down in there to sad,having courage to face is my preference.
”这句话中，1）with后面的时态不对，sitting就可以了，不用改成一般过去时 2）there在这里是副词，前面不需要介词in 3）to sad 的语法不正确，句子可以改成：Compared with doing nothing, mustering my courage to face difficulties is my preference.
2-as引导时间状语从句时，常常连接的主从句的动词是同时发生的，as翻译成“一边一边”，或者连接的动词是表示变化发展的，如：as time goes on, “as we meet some hard questions”这句话用when引导更合适
3-“some people may be choose to give up”，删除“be”，may情态动词，直接接动词原形即可，如果may后面接了be，那么be的后面还应该再紧跟一个形容词，如：some people may choose to give up / some people may be afraid(adj.)…
4-“I hold an opinion that we need in overcoming difficulties is courage.”we前面需再添加一个need的宾语what
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what we need in overcoming difficulties is courage英语作业 2015-06-20
Being a grade 3 student at junior high school ,what I worry about most now is senior high school extrance exam ,In my idea ,to overcome this difficulty ,what we need is courage .
Many students in my class now have given up thenselves,so their marks are getting lower and lower.But a few students ,marks are getting more and more excellent .It seems that after three years’fight,most weakers are going to be left behind ,and a small part of them are rushing forward to victory.
You know why
Because they have courage.Just like what the song “Wings of love”sing“Every time,I stop crying with my head high ”they also worry about the senior high school extrance exam , they also get some exam paper with low marks ,they also have trouble in solving problems .However,they have courage ,they don't cry when they fail ,they can face any mistakes ,so they won't be defeated by problems ,and they can also get some experience from them ,so the success
is belong to them eventually.
Therefore compared with giving up after failing ,holding your head high and going on your way with your courage should be your better choice ,don't you agree with me ？
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复王筱松 ：
得分：18分
作文写的不错，挺顺，没有照搬万能句型，而是结合了文章的主题，这点很好！
有几个小问题还需要注意：
1-“Just like what the song “Wings of love”sing…”这里的“sing”要改为“sings”，因为主语是“the song ”，是单数
2-any作为“任何”解，强调“任何一个”时，后面接可数名词单数形式
3-belong to本身是动词词组，句子正确的写法应该是：“so the success belongs to them eventually.”
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What we need in overcoming difficulties is hardwork 2015-06-20
Being a teenager studing in modern society, I hold an opinion that we need hardwork in overcoming difficulties.
One day , I had an exam. Because of nervous and carelessness, I didn’t pass the exam. Campared with giving up, studing hard was my preference. From then on, I did lots of exercises. In the next exam , I passed the exam and got the praise from the teacher.
Not only is hardwork a good spirit , but also it is a key to the success. All the teenagers living in modern society should be hardworking.
Don’t you agree with me?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复淼淼 ：
得分：17分
1-注意“studying”的拼写，漏了“y”
2-“but also it is a key to the success.”去掉“the”
3-“Because of nervous”中，nervous是形容词，of是介词，介词后面需要接名词，可以改成tension n.紧张 或者stress n.压力
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What we need in overcoming diffculties is courage.（Faith.） 2015-06-20
Nowadays，everyone have difficulties in our daily life. Being a teenager studying in modern society，I hold an opinion that courage is what we need in overcoming difficulties.
Once opon a time，I had a terrible marks. I didn＇t know how to improve my grade so that
I was very sad.When my teacher knew my condition. She encouraged me that I should have more courage not only can I face difficulties but also I can overcome difficulties.Her saying let me know that compared with other things，courage is important.
All in all，Courage help us a lot. Don＇t we need courage in overcoming difficulties？
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复Myx ：
得分：16分
有些Chinglish了，哈哈，考试时一定注意不能“随性”来写作文
来说几个需要改正的地方：
1-everyone是单数，后面的动词要用“has”，而不是“have”
2-encourage sb. to do sth. 这个句子“She encouraged me that I should have more courage…”可以改成：She encouraged me to be more brave
3-“compared with other things，courage is important.”这句话在important前面加一个more,意思更加完整
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What we need in overcoming difficuities is confidence.{念雅} 2015-06-20
What we need in overcoming difficulties?being a teenager living in modern society,I hold an opinion that what we need in overcoming difficuities is confidence.
If we want to overcome difficuities,we should encourage ourselves,we should believe we can,we should be confident.
Maybe you will said courage is important,yes,but compared with it,confidence is more important we need.Not only can we fight against difficulties with confidence,but also we can keep space with the time.Now it's a modern society,many new problems we have to face.So,being confident is the first step lead to success.
Don't you thing What we need in overcoming difficuities is confidence?
回复内容：(2015-06-23)
李霄鹏老师回复念雅 ：
得分：16分
能够运用万能句型，但是缺乏实例的描写，使文章显得有些“空”，可以多写点“有内容”的段落，这样也不至于词穷。另外，注意句子的正误，如果应用长难句有些困难，可以多加运用教过的万能句型，先保证句子的准确率。
“Maybe you will said courage…”这句话粗心了，情态动词后接动词原形，said应改为“say”
“confidence is more important we need.”这句话中“we need”多余，删除
“many new problems we have to face.”太过口语化了，在作文中，尽量正式一些
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